I would give this poem 3 out of 5 because although it included good ryhmes and alliteration it could be alot more funny. However I like the way the author takes the mick out of teachers in a strange way Over all I would say the poem is averagely funny and could do better.
It was alright this poem, but it didnt wow me like other poems i have read before, I think it was not for my age so that is why i did not like the poem very much. It was weird though because i did like the words how they rymed but overall i would say it was a average poem.
was good because it was about how teachers were made out of dust it was funny and the rhyming was good. i also liked working inmy group to talk about the poem.
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I would give this poem 3 out of 5 because although it included good ryhmes and alliteration it could be alot more funny.
However I like the way the author takes the mick out of teachers in a strange way
Over all I would say the poem is averagely funny and could do better.
I didn't find it funny but 4-6 year olds will find it very funny!
It was alright this poem, but it didnt wow me like other poems i have read before, I think it was not for my age so that is why i did not like the poem very much. It was weird though because i did like the words how they rymed but overall i would say it was a average poem.
was good because it was about how teachers were made out of dust it was funny and the rhyming was good. i also liked working inmy group to talk about the poem.
Jess
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