I emptied my bubble bath into the tub,
Determined to get myself thoroughly scrubbed.
The bottle had said "ONLY ON CAP OR TWO",
So I poured in the lot to see what it would do!
That still didn't seem quite enough to get clean,
So I followed it up with another fifteen.
Then three bars of soap and a dozen shampoo,
And two broken bath bombs to finish my brew!
I'll cut to the chase, this did not turn out well,
As the burbling, foaming bath bubbles did swell!
It wasn't all bad, I was clean smelt sweet,
But outside my soap suds had buried the street!
--Gareth Lancaster
13 comments:
I like the poem because it is funny and is talking about nonsense which i have enjoyed reading the poem lots. It rymes and it was funny. My marks for 10/10 is 8/10 .
My favourite poem is "Bubble Bath" because it is really funny and intresting to read. It is funny because it is talking about a boy that makes to many bubbles that fill his whole street.
ilike this poem because it is really funny and it was funny when he disobes whatthe capsays and puts the whole kaboosh in
all in all its quite good but could be a bit more funny about
8-9/10
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i think this peom is good, it is funny at times. i like the rhymes and how it over exaggerates at the end of the poemwhen loads of bubbles fill the whole street.x
out of all the poems ihave just read i think this is the best one because it has good rymes.Itcan be funny but only somtimes at teh end i think it is a bit stupid at teh end because they would not really be all over the street.x
it was not funny
i love choclate mil
i love choclate mil
chicken pie
I thought it was good but it wasen't that funny and it didn't make me laugh it was interesting.
poo pie
a bit childish but can be funny for 3-9 year olds
Good for people to know.
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